LONDINIUM: What is "tactical football" and why did I invent it?

Sorry it's been a while.  I'm writing Londinium when I have the opportunity and, unfortunately, I don't have the opportunity as much as I would like.

The World Cup is winding down so I thought I'd share a little something I made up for the book: tactical football.

You'll recall that the basis for the book is a present day police story set on a world where the Roman Empire didn't fall.  I imagine that our football (soccer) exists and is sometimes called "common football" or "community football," but a more militaristic version is the one that swept the world.  Created in the Army a few centuries ago by a fort's general who wanted to impart lessons of teamwork and strategic thinking on new recruits, it uses the circular arena floor of colosseums:

The active field measures 100 meters across, plus however much for out-of-bounds area, the benches, etc.

Labeled:

(Going forward, I'll be using "tactical football" terms for everything, but "our" terms will be in parentheses and italics.)

Oriented with the compass, there are four gates (goals) that all must be occupied at one time by one team in order to win a set.  At the end of three thirty-minute-periods of play, the winner is the team with the most completed sets.  The taking of an occupied or neutral gate awards a point, but these points do not count toward sets or decide victory.  If anything, points are indicators of how vigorous gameplay was.  Each gate is ten meters long and two meters high.  The approach (penalty box/area) is a twenty-meter arc centered on each gate.  The ball must pass through a gate in order for it to be claimed by an attacking team and it must not be touched by anyone's hands or arms while in play; defending shieldmen are the only exception.

The beginning of a game:

There are sixteen players on each team: twelve players and four shieldmen/shields (goalkeepers).  Above, the shields are the players ringed in white.  When not actively defending a gate, shields may play as regular players.

The game begins with two opposing gates occupied.  A skirmish occurs at centerfield: the ball is placed on the spot and all players stand outside the center ring.  The official whistles and players rush to take possession.  The shields and supporting players may instead head toward other gates in order to hopefully claim those if the ball enters that quarter.

A look at active gameplay:

The quarter in which the ball is present is called the active quarter (highlighted yellow above).  Before we get to the siege of the east gate, let us note the west gate.  The defending shield is allowed within the approach.  The attacking shield is not because the ball is not within the quarter.  As both the north and south quarters are as-yet-unclaimed and the ball is not within the quarter, neither team's shields are allowed within the approach.

When the ball entered the eastern quarter, the attacking shield was allowed to enter the approach.  While in active play, the attacking shields are allowed to grapple with the defending shields in order to prevent defense of the gate.  The number of attacking players within the approach, however, may not be more than the number of attackers outside the approach and within the quarter (this was my attempt to create an arcane "offsides" rule).   Above, you will note that there are four red players within the approach and five outside, thus this siege is within the rules.  Note: shields do not count toward these siege rules.

As originally conceived, such siege rules were not part of the game as played at Army forts, nor were penalties for assaults committed during play.  Needless to say, it was a far more rough sport.

If the ball goes out at the touch of an attacker (between the flags of the occupied quarter), the defending shield takes possession and kicks it where they please (goal kick).  If the ball goes out at the touch of a defender, an attacker takes possession at the nearest flag for a flanking kick (corner kick).  From there, the attacker may either kick it toward the same approach that was previously active, or they may kick it toward a different quarter altogether.  If a ball goes out between the flags of a neutral quarter, the team that didn't send it out may put into play by throw from the nearest flag.

If the attackers claim the gate, all previously defending players, including the shield, must abandon the approach as the new defending shield will kick or throw the ball to a different area of the field.  Once all four gates are claimed and defended by a single team, a set is completed and the game will continue with a skirmish at the centerfield and the two original gates being the only ones occupied by either team.  Example: let us say that red wins the siege depicted above.  The ball is kicked toward the north gate and red claims it.  Now red controls three of the four gates.  If they push toward south gate and claim it, they have won the set.  In order to deny them the set, blue must claim south gate or reclaim one of the other three.

Three thirty-minute periods are played, separated by twenty minute intervals for rest.  Reinforcements (substitutions) are allowed only during the first two periods: each team gets five per game and the player being removed from the field has one minute from the time the reinforcement enters the game.  This means a team may briefly have seventeen players on the field.  Each team may only place one reinforcement at a time.  Shields may be reinforced but the departing shield must leave the gate immediately.  (Note: a shield that defends a gate is not allowed to depart that gate until after it has been claimed by another team or until a set has been completed.)

In the third period, because reinforcements are not allowed, if players are injured, then that team must play without their full complement.  If a defending shield is injured, a non-shield player may take their position.

If both teams are tied at the end of the ninety minutes, a second ball is added to the field and play will continue until another set is completed, however long is necessary. 

Well.  Now that that's clear, let's see how I used it in the story:

Mm.  Maybe I overthink things a bit.

Thanks for reading. 

 

 

 

Four* Stories for "One Day in a Very Long Dominion War"

( * Two were selected.)

First off, download the whole book from Tranquility Press right here for free. 

Rewind with me to August of '25.  I was unemployed and the job search was going ... swell.  Just swell.  OK, it was not going swell.  Whatever.  I was ruminating on an idea or three for my next creative endeavors when I happened across a post by Tranquility Press on BSky.  They were accepting submissions for a Dominion War writing project.  The deadline was just a few days away.

The writing prompt was simple but thought-provoking.  One day in the middle of the Dominion War.  Not focusing on the major characters or anything ... just a day in the life.  Of anyone.

I think I went for a walk in the neighborhood and pretty quickly had an idea for and worked out the basics of my first story, "Loading Torpedoes," by the time I got home.

(You can read "Loading Torpedoes" below.)

I banged it out quickly.  Just a few hours for the first pass and then another pass or three in the following days.  I think it turned out well. 

As I wrote "Torpedoes," I had an idea for another story.  An interrogation of a Vorta series of clones by a Romulan operative who was tired of the whole thing.  Obviously, that became "Jolan Tru All Over Again."  I incorporated some Romulan lore created for Picard and threw in references to several events in Deep Space Nine's history around that time ... it's a fun story of two professionals trying to get at truths the other doesn't want to reveal.  Time is too short, of course, for progress to be made.  Writing this one took a bit longer as I kept wanting to adjust the dialogue, make it funnier here, hint at something else there ... Reading it in its final form made me want another pass, but that's OK.

(I might have caught the mistake I made ... did you spot it?) 

Art by Radinka Daynara

At some point while writing "Jolan Tru," I had another idea.  Something with Klingons.  I looked at a map of the Galaxy used on the series and spotted a little spot inside the Empire but near Federation space, so I had the thought that a colony there could be blended ... humans and Klingons together.  Far from the war in the Beta Quadrant but the war wasn't far from their minds.  That, of course, became "naD tetlh."

Art by Mika Kurzmann-Abrams

Like "Torpedoes," writing this one went very quickly.  The characters were fully formed in my head for whatever reason.  It was almost like I only had to transcribe what happened and what they said.  When the first pass was done, it was just about done-done.  Subsequent passes only tidied things up, made new word choices, and the like.  When it was done, it was immediately my favorite.

While writing that, I had the thought that I should do something with the "bad guys."  And I had a germ of an idea: a disgraced Jem'Hadar unit trying to regain their status, trying to regain their lives as only victory could.  It took another day, but I wrote "To Be the First."  A slight story, to be sure, intended as mostly an action piece with the Jem'Hadar we follow trying to survive a harsh planet and win the favor of the Founders.

With four stories now complete, I sent them off to Tranquility ... only to then see that they had extended the deadline.  Oh well.  A few months later, I got the good news that two had been selected.  I think they made the right choices.

To this day, I don't know what creative alchemy was going on and how I was able to crank out four complete tales in so short a span of time.  I wish I could bottle it and partake of it now and then.

Thanks to the editorial people and judges at Tranquility Press who chose my stories.  Thanks also to the two artists who depicted my characters (as seen above).  It's been fun. 

So, what are we writing about next?

(To read "Loading Torpedoes" and "To Be the First," click the JUMP)

"One Day In A Very Long Dominion War": a fan project anthology has chosen two of my short stories!

 

Earlier this year, I saw that there was a short story anthology coming from the very cool fan outfit, Tranquility Press.  And they had been accepting fan submissions.  Oh, I wish I had known about it sooner, I thought.  Then I saw that the due date was in the future ... I had two weeks left!

I read the prompt: 

We are asking for pieces on events around the galaxy on the 11th of March 2375 – the same day as the baseball match between DS9's "Niners" and USS T'Kumbra's "Logicians." The rules are simple: you can talk about anyone, any group, anything in the galaxy that has been altered by the titanic struggle of liberty against the Dominion: except Primary cast members from any Trek show. We don't want to know what Jean-Luc Picard or Katherine Janeway were up to, we want you to tell us a story we haven't heard before. We want to know about Federation reservists on the ground on Chin'Toka, convoy duty near Minos Korva, or new Romulan fleets working up behind the neutral zone. 

We encourage you to consider stories beyond the front line, Starship crews, Marine Raiders, and Klingon Warriors. One Day in A Very Long Dominion War should be about the people's war too; the Federation factory worker, the Cardassian civilian, the Romulan intelligence attache.

Each story should be between 1500 and 3500 words.

With a burst of creative energy, I sat down and wrote four short stories, finishing them all just in time for the August deadline.  I didn't know if I could submit four ... but I did anyway.  In the end, they chose two.  (In my opinion, the best two.)  That is a huge honor ... there were so few slots, but they gave two to me?  Insane.  I'm very grateful.

Here are one of the judge's thoughts about my two stories, as posted by TP:

"naD tetlh" has an undeniable sense of 'trueness' about it that really left an imprint on me after reading. It's a remarkable, human story that presents as a slice-of-life, but it cleverly sneaks up on you with some great emotional moments. Short but by no means lacking, this story conjures up a great sense of place with economy of description and dialogue. Deft work here, a great 'war-at-home' tale.

"Jolan Tru All Over Again" speaks to my love of cold war spy thrillers, and there's something of a LeCarré feel to this locked-box narrative. It's like a one-act play, an echo of beloved DS9 episodes like "Duet" and "Waltz," with two characters sparking off one another as they fence and dig at the truth. There's no fat on this story at all, it's stripped back, lean and scalpel-sharp, and I enjoyed how it gets into the character of the Romulan and Vorta leads.

I'm not certain when the final anthology will be published, but I'll be sure to keep everyone apprised.  I will absolutely be posting links when it is.  And, when it drops, I will also post my two "leftover" stories: "Loading Torpedoes" and "To Be the First."

So.  Something to look forward to.

Thanks for reading. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Writing LONDINIUM, Part I: Maps and the first chapter!

 Finding time to write has been the difficult part of getting going for this book thus far.  And when I have a bit of time, I can sit and stare at the screen.  Sometimes I'm just not "feeling it" for whatever reason.  That sucks and there's little to be done for it.

Another obstacle?  What to listen to as I write.  Readers know I listed to the thirteen-plus hours of the Galactica/Caprica soundtracks over and over, totaling thousands of hours, but what to listen to as I write a story set in a modern Roman Empire?  Well, I started by listening to Roman and Greek music (or at least recreations thereof).  Eh.  Then I moved on to movie soundtracks, but those weren't terribly inspiring and I often got distracted thinking about the movies and scenes I was listening to.  I ended up back in the Galactica-verse.  Yeah, I'm listening to Bear McCreary's great music, over and over again, again, as I write.

Longtime readers know I love to map things.  It helps me immerse myself in the worlds I'm building and maybe it helps readers, too.  If nothing else, it shows the readers that I actually put some thought into the bullshit I write.  This time, since I am writing about our world in a different dimension, mapping our world with Roman lines and names on everything would be helpful.  So here you go:

 

Click to embiggen

 

I had to do a lot of reading on Roman history and indigenous languages to understand how the world might look.  Europe was called "Europe," the Atlantic "the Atlantic," and "Africa" to the Romans is what we would call "north Africa."  "Oriens" is Latin for "east" and I chose that for Asia's name; thus also the "Eastern Ocean" aka "Oriental Ocean" ("Oriental" not having been used as a slur in that universe).  Some of the other continent names come from an ancient map of the world by Crates of Mallus.  He called the land south of north Africa "Antoeca" while he also hypothesized a pair of continents on the other side of the world, Perioeca and Antipoda.  Thus, when my Romans went exploring, that's what they called these lands in the "New World."  Australia gets the name "Marege" from the Makassar people of Indonesia, who, centuries ago, spoke of the land to their south as "Marege," the "wild country."  

I had to map Londin a bit, too, so I started with the various police districts and I imagined greater Londin as a bit bigger than the London of our universe:

"Southwark" is a name used in London today, but it's a quite ancient name, so I kept it for the book.  Newfield and Broadhand are based on ancient Roman settlements in those areas and I just translated their Latin names into English.  If you Google "Londinium," you'll likely see a polygon settlement on the north side of the Thames; that's the "Old City" in the above map.  The "New City" is the provincial and city buildings (the governor's palace, the Senate house, magistracy, etc.) that function today on the south side of the River Tames (no "h" in that universe, and it rhymes with "aims").  "LIC" is the "Londin Intercontinental Skyport"; "The Star" is the massive railway and subway (called "underway") complex that got its name because the converging rail lines looked like a star.  "Portaper" is a neighboring city that handles a lot of cargo because it straddles the Tames; name derives from Latin for "port" and "opening."

The story of Londinium is set today, but in a world where the Roman Empire didn't go away.  (I wrote out a very detailed history of the world that I'll probably include in the book as an index.  I did it mostly to keep things straight in my head as ideas came to me and to provide backstory to the various cultures.)  The world is governed from Roma and all people born on Earth are citizens of the Roman Republic.  Londin has been associated with Roma for almost two thousand years.  The Normans never invaded, England never had its own kings or queens, English isn't spoken there ... neither is Italian, for that matter.  The language of the Republic is called "Roma," and it's probably some flavor of Italian, but not exactly.  (This is why some cities may sound Italian to our ears, like "Bonaventura.")  I'm writing in English because that's what I know ... I'm not JRR Tolkien over here inventing a whole new language.  Well, at least not this time.  The people of Brittan are not reserved ... they are wholly different than the people of Great Britain.  That's something I wanted to communicate in this first chapter.  These aren't Brits, so don't imagine them speaking with a Cockney accent or something.  Slang "yes" and "no" comes from corrupted Germanic, "ya," "na."  There's no "OK"; these people are more apt to say "Aye" in its place.  The Republic has existed in one form or another for almost three millennia.  It is ever-present in the people's lives and no one questions it.  It's a different world.  I'm curious if all of this is conveyed.

Read the chapter after the JUMP:

"CAPRICA": Available now!

 

From the author of the acclaimed Lords of Kobol and Colonies of Kobol series ... 

In 2010, the Battlestar Galactica prequel series, Caprica, debuted and was canceled. We saw "The Shape of Things to Come," but what happened next? 

In CAPRICA, read the rest of the story. Follow the Graystones as they try to build a body for Zoe. Follow the Adamas as Joseph rebuilds his life and falls in deeper with the Ha'la'tha. Follow the Cylons as they spread throughout colonial society and are radicalized by the religious teachings of Sister Clarice Willow. And then it happens: revolution. 

The Cylon War ensnares billions. As the colonies struggle to unite in the face of this dire threat, the Graystones and Adamas are torn apart. The Messengers of The One True God work behind the scenes to ensure the survival of the species. And Zoe must make a choice: fight to protect humanity or fight on behalf of her "children," the Cylons? 

There is a Plan and questions will be answered. 

(Note: this book was previously published as part of Colonies of Kobol.)

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In other big news, since it's my birthday, I'm giving away stuff.  My scifi/horror ebooks are now FREE.

Read all about it here.

Thanks for reading.

EVERYTHING* IS FREE!

 

 

To celebrate my 50th birthday, I'm giving away my books.

Yes, Lords of Kobol and Colonies of Kobol are free (as is Caprica), but now my other scifi/horror ebooks are, too.  No longer will you have to shell out the princely sum of 99¢ to read these monoliths of modern literature.

DISPLACED: A Baltimore police officer awakens in his car, sitting atop a chunk of road in the middle of a cornfield. For the next several hours, he fights his way through strange creatures, meets up with odd companions and comes under siege by terrifying beasts. Displaced is an action-packed, sci-fi mystery that will keep you turning the page until the very end.  

DIARY OF A SECOND LIFE: Three hundred years after the end of the world as we know it, young Wess Marin feels compelled to leave his insular community and strike out in hopeful desperation on his own. He aims to stop the menace that still ravages mankind, but on his way, he will encounter terror, both from the living and the dead. Wess finds a gleaming city, but will they help him realize his goal?

8 DAYS: Imagine the end of the world is coming in eight days. What will you do in the time left to you? Now, imagine that the world doesn't end after all. How do you feel about what you've done? Follow the stories of several people and the world as they tackle these questions in the near-apocalypse novel 8 Days.

THE ART OF DEATH: An evil art museum curator has found a Babylonian artifact and performs a ceremony in the light of a Blood Moon to gain eternal life. He needs sacrifices, lots of sacrifices, and he gathers monsters from the world's folklore to do his bidding. Follow his victims as they fight for their lives in one hellish night at the museum. Vampires, werewolves, mummies, and more await you in The Art of Death!

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"CAPRICA" FAQrica! plus an EXCERPT

 

 

Everything You Want/Need to Know about CAPRICA (the book) ...

"Is this fan fiction?"

Yes.  I wasn't paid by Universal to write this therefore I am not charging you to read it.  It's free.

"So did you just pull the story out of your ass or what?"

That's a little harsh, but actually, no.  I didn't.  The fansite Caprica Times published an interview with the last showrunner, Kevin Murphy, after the series was cancelled.  In it, he explained that season two would pick up five years after season one (where we see them in the finale's montage) and feature occasional flashbacks to show how they got there.  Now, I didn't feel like I could do that in my writing because constant flashbacks would get annoying/confusing, but I felt like I could tell a more linear story, showing the five years leading up to the "Shape of Things to Come" montage and then beyond.  A few story beats were also revealed by Murphy, but I won't be divulging those here as they're basically spoilers for the book.  To put it succinctly, I pretended like I was a one-man writer's room for season two and three of the show and Murphy's comments were my instructions.  (Anything that falls outside of his instructions, I guess, does qualify as "pulling it out of my ass.")

"Do I need to have watched Caprica to enjoy this?"

Are you serious?  Yes.  You should watch Caprica.  There are some references and story points that will only make sense if you've seen the show.  I wrote it right after a binge of the series, so I'm sure it'll read well after a binge, too.

"What about Galactica?"

Hmm.  Probably not.  You're OK there.  It'll be enhanced by having watched it, though, I'm sure.

"What about Blood & Chrome?"

You are thorough; I'll say that for you.  "Need to," no.  If you saw it once, that's enough.

And I'll stop you now.  No, you do not need to have watched The Plan before reading this, either. 

"OK, smart guy.  What about Deadlock?  Should I have played the video game Deadlock?

Huh.  You got me.   No, you don't have to have played Deadlock.  A few ships get their names and designs from the game, but no storylines or characters.  The base game starts in year five of the Cylon War and this book only covers the first few years of the war.  There's no real crossover.

 "Maps?  Where did you get these maps?"

I made them.  The "stellar" maps are based on the QMX map released a decade or so ago, which was based on a writer's room document by Bob Harris, Kevin Grazier, and Jane Espenson.  A lot of tidbits about the various colonies come from that document and I used them in writing Caprica and Colonies of Kobol.  The map of Caprica itself is based on the very tiny bit of land visible on the QMX map and a couple of shots from the show.

"Wait a minute ... Colonies of Kobol?  This book isn't really 'new,' is it?"

No, not really.  CoK is an enormous book (over 2,000 pages in Word) so I'm sure that's daunting to potential readers.  Plus, some people might not care about rando characters centuries before the TV shows on other worlds.  There is a hunger for more Caprica, however, so releasing just that portion of CoK made sense to me.  Caprica fans will get a taste of what might have been, and maybe they'll want to try out the rest of my books.

There are a couple of new pages, however.  You can read those after the JUMP.

"CAPRICA": coming June 9!

To celebrate the fifteenth anniversary of the TV series Caprica, on Monday, June 9, I'll be publishing this:

 

I'll be clear right up front: this isn't a new* book.  If you've read Colonies of Kobol (Special Edition, preferably), you've already read this.  This is what was originally published as Book Thirteen in Volume Three.

"So why publish it separately?"  Well, to ensnare new readers.  Colonies of Kobol is huge so many people didn't give it a chance.  Or maybe they just weren't interested in some guy's unofficial made-up history to a twenty-year-old TV show.  (I don't take it personally.)  If, however, it were more inextricably tied to a TV show ... like Caprica ... maybe people would give it a shot.  And, if they liked it, maybe they'll back up and read Lords of Kobol or Colonies of Kobol.

Plus, I see people posting all the time about Caprica, so this might scratch that itch for many.

There's more news coming on June 9, but I'll save it for later.  Thanks for reading.

* - There is one part of Caprica that is new, but I'll post it on the blog for everyone to see when we get closer to the date.

"Thanks, Facebook": Well, this is awkward

I was going to post the "big" announcement today, but I'll save it until Monday.

  

You may recall my post from a few months ago ... the one titled, "Frak Facebook."  Yeah.

To briefly summarize for those who didn't see it: my Facebook accounts were hacked back in December and were locked, I attempted to regain control, Meta wanted me to verify the email address and password that the hacker changed the accounts to and I couldn't (naturally), so they said they couldn't do anything about it.

So, having resigned myself to losing that nice "ety3rd" brand synergy across all platforms, I created a new author page at "ety3rdbooks" and went about trying to rebuild my audience.

Fast-forward to this morning.  Out of nowhere, I get an email ... no images, no links, no nothing ... stating, "After reviewing your appeal, your Page Edward T. Yeatts III has been published. This means it can now be viewed publicly. The Facebook Team."  Sure enough, I went to "ety3rd" and it was visible.  Yes, I had to spend the better part of an hour getting everything reconnected and whatnot, but hey, it's back.  (If I had to guess, today may have been the first time a real human looked at my problem and was able to spot the issues right away.)

So, please, follow me at

https://www.facebook.com/ety3rd/

For everyone who joined me at "ety3rdbooks," don't worry: I'll keep posting there.  Just in case.

Thanks for reading.  (Announcement coming Monday.)

"Frak Facebook": What's Been Going On, What's Next, and More

UPDATE: read the latest post HERE.

 

Almost a year since my last blog post?  Wow.  I guess it's time to catch up ...

If you followed (past tense) my Facebook page, "ety3rd," you probably saw something like this the last time you went there:

That's because some nefarious scoundrel hacked my page, created a new account with my info, broke Facebook's rules, and then got their page plus all of mine banned from Facebook.  I spent over a month trying to get Facebook to understand, "No, that wasn't me," and, "I just want my author page back," and, "These are the only email addresses I've used in concert with my Facebook account," and, "Don't you think the hacker changed that?" and, "How would I know what the hacker changed my password to?"  Needless to say, after several weeks and a useless $15 purchase of "Meta verified" so I could get "enhanced support" (insert rolling eyes), Facebook did a grand total of jack-shit to help me out.  Thus the title of this post.  (And this is to say nothing of Zuckerberg's assholery.)

So, if you want to follow me on that dying platform, this is my new URL: https://www.facebook.com/ety3rdbooks

These days, I'm mostly sticking to bsky because it's just a far nicer place and experience than the other places I've posted in recent years.  (You can find links to all my stuff at my Linktree.)

It's been a nice year selling stuff on Etsy, so thanks to all of you for getting my posters and shirts.  Check out my line of "Simple Symbols" t-shirts ... those are proving popular.

I was in the hospital for a few days for heart arrhythmia and my insurance said it was "not medically necessary," so I've got that going for me.

Writing-wise, I was working on a Galactica-related ... thing for a while, but I've set it aside for now.  You saw my last blogpost here.  I'll go into greater detail some other time, but I hit an obstacle in the storytelling and haven't felt the urge to get past it just yet.

If you've read Colonies of Kobol - Special Edition, first off, thank you.  Secondly, if you read the author's commentary, you're aware that I hinted at something super-secret being in the works.  (After all, if I made a cover, you know I've given it some serious thought.)  I have worked a little on that, but there are still no plans for a release, to say nothing of actually finishing the thing.

I think I mentioned something somewhere once about having an idea for a book wherein we follow a pair of homicide detectives who are working to solve a high-profile case in the modern day of a Roman Empire that never fell.  The more I think about it, the more I like it.  That might be the next thing I start to write, assuming life doesn't continue to, uh, get in the way.

Thanks for reading.

Just doodlin' ...

 

For no reason at all ...

"Colonies of Kobol - Collection: Special Edition" - DOWNLOAD NOW

 

Visit the sixteen Colonies of Kobol in a single volume ...

Two thousand years before the Cylons destroyed the Twelve Colonies and the Battlestar Galactica led a ragtag fleet to Earth, the Lords of Kobol fell and mankind fled for the Colonies.

See the settling of the first colony on Gemenon.  Behold the destruction of Earth and the flight of the Final Five.  Witness the rise of empires on Virgon and Leonis and the thousand-year-war waged across the plains of Tauron, the seas of Picon, and the mountains of Sagittaron.  Visit the jungles of Libran and Scorpia, the mines of Canceron, the farms of Aerilon, and the volcanoes of Aquaria.  Read the continuation of the short-lived TV series Caprica and watch the horrors of the Cylon War and the creation of The Colony.  Revisit New Caprica and then, on our own world, go on one last journey with Bill Adama and Saul Tigh, and get a look into our own future as the Messengers of The One True God work to free mankind of the cycle.

This is the definitive special edition collection of these books in chronological order, complete with additional chapters, behind-the-scenes information, art, pics, and author's commentary.  Learn all about the writing of these tales, connections to the Battlestar Galactica and Caprica TV shows, and much more.

There is a Plan and questions will be answered.

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Writing the Special Editions Part XI: Finally, "Lords of Kobol - Special Edition" available for download everywhere!

It took a month-plus, but Lords of Kobol - Collection: Special Edition is now available for download from multiple retailers.  The links are below; a needlessly detailed recounting of what happened immediately follows.

So LoK SE was published on Smashwords on Dec. 8.  Smashwords is the free site through which I publish my books.  Because I can't charge for my BSG-related work and Smashwords lets me make books free to download, it makes sense.  And, Smashwords has what they call the "premium catalog," which means they distribute it to other online retailers (Apple, B&N, etc. ... not Amazon; they won't let me charge $0.00)  Typically, it takes about four-ish days for a book to be uploaded and then get distributed elsewhere.

Not this time.

When I publish through Smashwords, I upload a Microsoft Word "doc" file which then gets converted into everything else.  LoK SE is a large book with a LARGE amount of hyperlinking inside.  The Word file is 1,314 pages long and 13.8 MB.  There are over 400 chapters, plus commentary on about 85% of those chapters.  Fifty images.  It's big.  The problem, as it turns out, was the table of contents.  Not the one I made; the one that was automatically generated.  

If you've read the book, you know there's a table of contents that links to all the chapters, the maps, etc.  At the end of most chapters, there's a link to the author's commentary on that chapter.  Each of these links require two things: a bookmark and a hyperlink.  For example, for chapter one of Book One, I select the heading for that chapter, click "insert bookmark," and give it a name ("I1" - for Book One, chapter one).  Then, in the table of contents, I highlight "I - PYTHIA," click "insert link," select "place in this document," and then the "I1" bookmark.  So I had to insert bookmarks and hyperlinks for all 420-ish chapters, plus the maps, prefaces, the acknowledgements at the end, the list of other books, etc.  That's 430 pairs of bookmarks and links.  This doesn't include the commentary.  I'm guesstimating that there are about 350 "author's commentary" sections, which means that's another 350 pairs of bookmarks and links.  Because the automatically generated table of contents looks for these bookmarks, that's a whole mess of stuff that could end up in the ToC that shouldn't be there.

(This does not include the "hidden bookmarks" that Word creates for some godsdamned reason every time you open the file, make a change, or look at the screen funny.  By the time I was ready to upload the finished doc file, there were literally thousands of these bastards.  I had to create a macro in Word to delete them all because doing so by hand would have been impossible.)

So, when I uploaded the LoK SE doc file, the system struggled to reconcile the ToC as I had it (just the chapters, maps, etc.) against the massive number of other bookmarks not in that ToC.  The epub file generated by Smashwords, when downloaded and its ToC opened, included scores of oddball links at the end, plus missing legitimate links.

After conversation with Smashwords support (shoutout to Matt T.), I learned that there is a special way to create bookmarks you don't want in that auto-generated ToC.  Prefixing a bookmark with "ref_" means the auto-generator will ignore it and it won't end up in the epub's ToC.  That means every "author's commentary" bookmark would need to be edited to add "ref_" at the start and every link pointing to those bookmarks would need to be redone, too.  

Needless to say, this took a while.*

Reupload.  Better, but still had bad, "stray" links in the ToC and missing links, too.  Edited and reuploaded again.  No change.

At this point, I decided to the back-and-forth navigation was just too complex.  Support said a well-crafted epub file would likely be the solution (and Smashwords allows those uploads, too).  I started down that path with the program Calibre.  Days later, the epub file was finished and I uploaded it.  I downloaded the epub from Smashwords and it looked OK ... but would it pass review and get in the premium catalog?  Nearly a week later, the answer was "yes."  

TL;DR: here are the links:

Smashwords (in all file formats)
Apple
Barnes & Noble
Everand
Gardners
Kobo
Odilo

Please, download the book from your online service of choice.  But, most importantly, be sure you give it a rating and leave reviews wherever you can.  This helps spread the word and get more readers on board.  I really appreciate it and hope you enjoy it.

* - Holy shit.  Colonies of Kobol - Special Edition is going to take forever.  That's well over 500 chapters and author's commentary sections.  It'll take weeks to get it in shape, but at least I knew I would be starting with an epub file thanks to the 15MB Wall.  I better get started now if I want it to be ready to go for March 15.

Thanks for reading.

"Lords of Kobol - Collection: Special Edition" - DOWNLOAD NOW!

 

All five acclaimed Lords of Kobol books collected in a single volume ...

Thousands of years before the Cylons destroyed the Twelve Colonies and the Battlestar Galactica led a ragtag fleet to Earth, the Lords of Kobol lived among mankind in peace and harmony. Zeus, Hera, Apollo, Athena, Ares ... the gods provided and the people worshipped. But who or what were they? In Book One: Apotheosis, see Kobol in its golden age, with gods and humanity working together, and witness the creation and exodus of the Thirteenth Tribe. In Book Two: Descent, learn the origins of the Olympians and the tale of their coming to Kobol, as well as their war against non-believers. In Book Three: The Final Exodus, watch the end of the Pantheon's reign as Cylons revolt and mankind flees for the Twelve Colonies. In Prelude: Of Gods and Titans, spend more time with Zeus and the gods, and meet their parents, the Titans, and observe the beginning of the cycle. And in the background of it all, The One True God and its Messengers seek to preserve humanity in the face of doom. Finally, in Alternate: Tales from Ancient Days, read a different take on the end of the world and how the gods played their parts.

This is the definitive special edition collection of these five works, complete with deleted chapters, behind-the-scenes information, art, pics, and author's commentary. Learn all about the writing of these tales, connections to the Battlestar Galactica and Caprica TV shows, and much more.

There is a Plan and questions will be answered.

Available for free from:

Smashwords (in all file formats)
Apple
Barnes & Noble
Everand
Gardners
Kobo
Odilo

Please rate and review where you got it!  Spread the word!

Writing the Special Editions Part X: LoK is Locked!

I've finished another read-through of the Lords of Kobol - Collection: Special Edition.  Didn't change much at all, so I believe I'm at the "walk away" point.  I'm locking it and eagerly anticipating publishing it on Friday, December 8.  Two weeks from today and right on schedule.

For kicks, I created this graphic showing the various covers I used over the last twelve years:

Click to embiggen

(Doesn't include the "marble edition" covers since those were never actually published.)

I'll make another post in a week or so detailing the timing of it but if you're following me on social media, it'll be hard for you to miss it.  (Here's my Linktree page so you can get a quick look at my social accounts and choose whichever one floats your boat.)

Thanks for reading.

Writing the Special Editions Part IX: ONE MONTH AWAY

Just finishing up my last readthrough ... Thankfully, I'm not having to change much.  Just dotting "i"s and the like.

It's almost done.

Writing the Special Editions Part VIII: One More Time!

A brief update to let everyone know that I've begun the second complete (cover-to-cover) readthrough of the Lords of Kobol Collection.  

I'll be making sure all the links are correct, checking for errors, mistakes, and so on, ... stuff like that.  I'll also be evaluating the commentary I wrote a few months back to ensure that it's still what I want to be out there, inextricably tied to the "definitive version" of these novels.  

I'm also keeping an eye on that 15MB wall, but that wasn't a major issue with the LoK Special Edition.  

Everything is still on track for it to be released on the twentieth anniversary of the BSG miniseries ...

December 8.

Thanks for reading.

How the Strikes Will Impact Your Favorite Shows (and Conventions)

Pic from TrekMovie.com

(For an article that speaks more generally, click here.  I'll be focusing on Star Trek because, let's face it, the strikes have nothing to do with why we haven't heard anything about the new Galactica show.)

Although, this pic feels appropriate, too.

The Writer's Guild of America went on strike in May.  The actors guild (SAG-AFTRA) began theirs on Thursday.  Among the demands from both camps are 1) an updated compensation structure that deals with streaming content more fairly and 2) restrictions on the usage of AI and other computer tools that perform the duties from either union.  (After all, ensigns should make more than this and extras shouldn't have to worry about being in their own version of "Joan Is Awful.")

(And outside of the writers and actors, one mustn't forget the contributions of the many scores of people behind-the-scenes who make these shows possible.  They, too, will be out of work.  Visual Effects Production Manager Shawn Ewashko has tweeted praises about the team he's assembled for Trek live action going forward, but he's also worried that prolonged strikes could decimate that team as its members have to find other work to feed their families.)

Both strikes have come at a time of desperation for Paramount and when its future is clouded.  Any discussion of post-strike Paramount and Trek would be pure speculation at this point, so  I will focus on the productions that are already greenlit and at various stages of completion.

DISCOVERY: As we all know, after filming on the fifth season was wrapped last November, Paramount canceled the show in March.  New scenes were written to wrap up the series and pickup shoots were planned shortly thereafter.  A tweet from showrunner Michelle Paradise indicates that filming for those pickups began in late April, so we can speculate that the filming is complete by now.  Post-production is still underway on DIS season five and that should continue unabated.

STRANGE NEW WORLDS: The show was renewed for season three and writing was completed before the WGA strike in May, however, the series delayed its production start in solidarity with the WGA.  Once the strikes are over, SNW will likely resume shortly afterward.

LOWER DECKS: Voice actors are also on strike, but the recording for season four was completed last year.  Assuming it's not already finished, the show is in the hands of the animators and should be released as planned.  A fifth season was ordered in March, but production on that will have to wait until after the strikes.  (Writing for animation is handled by a different guild than the WGA.)

PRODIGY: (sigh)  Despite its cancellation (more precisely, renewal reversal), the second season is nearing completion.  (The voice acting was complete.)  The Emmy-nominated series is being shopped to other streaming services and producers are confident it will find a home.  

SECTION 31: While a writers room for this show existed way back in 2020, it hasn't been said publicly if the conversion of that series into a single film was completed before the strike began in May (making S31 into a movie was announced in March, so I'm sure that some work was already underway).  Regardless, production has not yet begun and won't until after the strikes.

STARFLEET ACADEMY: Perhaps not as long as S31, but SA has had a writers room for a while and it was already active when the series was announced in March.  However, like S31, no production is expected for a while.

LEGACY: (Not greenlit, but the people want it.)  One of the powers that be says the "appetite for it is undeniable," but there won't be any discussion about it officially until the strike(s) are over.

Conventions:  You may not have seen this coming, but there's a long list of things striking actors can't do.  Sure, SAG-AFTRA members cannot film their roles, but they can't promote them, either.  That means no conventions.  (I'm not sure what's going to happen at Comic-Con then.)  It is unclear at the moment if an actor from a legacy show (like TNG, DS9, etc.) can appear at a convention.  Armin Shimerman is looking for more info while a tweet from Anson Mount suggests that they can make a "personal appearance," so long as they aren't promoting anything specific.

And now you're up to speed.  Let's hope the compensation for writers and actors both can enter the 21st century and end this thing before too long.

Writing the Special Editions Part VII: "Colonies" is Done

Well, it took a couple of months, but the commentary for Colonies of Kobol is complete.  The whole thing is 2,631 pages in Word with about 400 being the added commentary.  That's a lot of pics, show connections, linguistic discussions, and so on.  A lot.

You may recall a previous blog post wherein I was worried about the file size.  Well, yeah.  That's still a concern.  (Warning: lots of talk about how the sausage is made follows.)

Smashwords, the ebook publishing site I use, has a limit of 15MB when it comes to uploading .doc files.  The final version of CoK SE (with low-quality images) is 20.1MB.  So that's out.  However, they also allow uploading epub files and the limit on those is 20MB.

I've experimented with this and here's how it went.  Calibre can make epub files from .docx files, so I converted the book from .doc to .docx and then ran it through Calibre.  I don't know what black magic it utilizes, but the final epub file was only 5.9MB.  Seeing that, I decided to create a version of the book with high-quality images.  Well, that .doc file was 33MB, but after converting it to an epub, it was 18.7MB.  Huzzah!

But there's a problem.  Smashwords apparently employs rigorous standards for the epubs they allow to be published and their site specifically mentioned Calibre (and other programs) as often providing files that get rejected.  They run the epubs through EPUBCHECK, which is apparently a standard for those files agreed upon by some sort of international cabal.  I downloaded a program that allows me to check the files myself and, expecting the worst, I went ahead and ran CoK SE through.  To my unending surprise, it got a green check mark and "OK."

I mean, my formatting isn't crazy because Smashwords also has rigorous criteria for their .doc uploads.  I assumed with all of my footnotes and links to and fro in 90%+ chapters, it would throw off something.  But it didn't.  

I'm cautiously optimistic for next March when CoK SE will be published.  My plan is to upload the epub to Smashwords and see what happens.  If it ends up getting rejected, I'll have a contingency standing by, perhaps the barebones "no commentary" version that barely fit under 15MB but includes links to my Google Drive with the full version.

So there you go.  I'll let both LoK SE and CoK SE sit and marinate for a bit.  Then, in the fall, I'll give the commentaries another pass and be ready to publish the first one in December.  As planned.

Thanks for reading.

Writing the Special Editions Part VI: An Unseen Pic and Commentary

 I'm currently in the middle of the Cylon War on my first pass through the Special Edition of Colonies of Kobol.  I'm having a lot of fun rereading this and writing my thoughts in there, including pics and other stuff, references to the shows, translating the Tauran dialogue, ...

At any rate, I thought you might enjoy a sample piece of the commentary, along with a map I created while I wrote Book Thirteen: Caprica, but didn't end up publishing in the final version of Volume Three.

In this chapter, we have the first mention of specific sectors.  On screen, the only sector mentioned was Sector Twelve, which included the location of Djerba in Blood & Chrome.  Due to its proximity to Scorpia and the blue interstellar gases visible, I determined that Sector Twelve was in or near Helios Gamma.  I doodled and scribbled for a while and eventually came up with a rudimentary map:

Let me state up front that I didn't want to publish this in the final book because I wasn't happy with the way it looked, plus I couldn't figure out how to deal with overlapping sectors between systems, how far out from each system the sector should spread, would there be sectors in the Gulf?, and so on.

In the end, I decided that there were twenty sectors overall.  Sectors Alpha, Beta, Gamma, and Delta are comprised of the main planets of each respective solar system, but a solar system is much bigger than just the orbits of its planets.  There are Kuiper Belts, Oort Clouds, and more.  Simplified for the purposes of this book, however, I primarily worried about the Outer Belt (aka Kuiper Belt) where dwarf planets, tylium, ores, water, etc., can be found. 

So why are the other sectors numbered that way?  Well, for Sector Twelve, I knew it had to be in Gamma and I knew I wanted it closer to the Gulf so Husker and Coker's Raptor could reach that sector in something approaching a reasonable amount of time.  As for the rest, I dunno.  It made sense to me at the time I made it.  I recall thinking the first sector of each system would be anchored to its "corner."  (For example, since Alpha is in the lower left from this perspective at this time, its first sector is in the lower left corner, and the others go from there.)

Let's just say the military likes to complicate things and move past it.

Thanks for reading.